This is better than your last two posts. :-)
I am very sorry about her mother who was killed by the drunk driver, Zeke, and I felt bad about Kate because she lost her mom. I wish her mom was alive and never got upset.
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I am very sorry about her mother who has killed by drunk driver Zeke and I felt bad about Kate because she lost her mom. I wish her mom was alive and never get upset.
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I am very sorry about her mother who was killed by the drunk driver. Zeke and I felt bad about Kate because she lost he mom,I wish her mom was alive and never got upset.