Please read my conclusion and just give me advice.....

Question

The topic is prejudice and all, out of 10 what would you give it and why.

To sum it up, prejudice is a serious topic that we still discuss today. Governments have made laws based on prejudice but people still break these laws. Prejudice can horrify a person’s ability to succeed and will lead them to problems, so we all should work together on making a society or love, equality, and respect.

Answer 1

Do you mean the second sentence?

Do you mean "horrify" in the third sentence?

Your last sentence is wishy-washy.

I can't begin to judge this conclusion without knowing the rest of the essay.

Answer 2

ok
thanks anyways :(

Answer 3

by he way what advice can you give so i could do better later

Answer 4

Check the sentences I questioned. Be more specific in your last sentence.