please help me write a paragraph for an editorial response to the following Washington Post article with a clear thesis.(will put the link in comments)

Answer 1

will not let me post link so the article is

the Washington post

Many Afghans Lost to Hazards Of Childbirth
by
pamela constable

Answer 2

What do you want to say?

Answer 3

@ms.sue i kinda know the direction i want to go for my thesis but idk if it is very good...
"Hospitals need to be built in more desolate areas of afghanistan to help decrease the risk of fatality for mothers and unborn infants."

Answer 4

Who's going to pay for these hospitals?

Answer 5

good point!and i wrote my paragraph can you give me your opinion on [email protected]

Answer 6

The healthcare system in Afghanistan needs to appease mother's and an unborn child's chances of survival during birth. Mothers' lives are less significant than the child's according to many people of Afghanistan. Pregnancy is highly supported within their religion as a child is "the fruit of heaven".The country boisterously promotes the idea of having a child every year, which leads to ample miscarriages and deaths of both mother and babies. The country needs new hospitals and healthcare workers in more desolate areas. The leaders should seek out help from foreign countries to diligently fund the new medical help.