PLEASE Help me create a better thesis statement than this:

Question

Three arguments can be identified in “The Private History of a Campaign That Failed” that support the idea that war isn’t for everyone.

The arguments are that soldiers should be adequately trained before entering a war, soldiers should consist of men not boys, and war could be traumatizing for the weak of mind.

Answer 1

Scroll down to the post by Com 156. Read and study all the information in the two linked webpages I gave that student. Follow all directions.