Ovid is a great artist; He used different objects to represent the idea of transformations. He used water, tree, earth and heaven as metamorphosis symbolism .But his stories seems to be fiction in the modern age. For example beautiful daughter of a river god, Daphne transformed into a tree. Such kind of poems does not exist in the reality but still popular in the people.
In Ovid ‘love poems, he teaches about true and eternal love .For example pymarus is very beautiful love poem, in which a boy suicides when he find out that her girl friend is dead. This poem reminds me Romeo Juliet‘s love story that how they die for each other .The bodies of Pyramus and Thisbç were buried in one sepulcher, and the tree ever after brought forth purple berries, as it does to this day.
Ovid's poems is a colorful collection of Folklore, Legends, and Mythology from the Greek cultures. His poems also represenrs how gods intract with humans, how gods and godess make their decision for them. Ovid is definitely seems a leading poet of his era. He has wide vacabulary ,humorous tone ,a sense of metaphor and a knowelege of the world ,which he doesn’t hesitate to show off. All to all, his love poems and instructional works have firmly established him as one of the greatest influences on Western culture.
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There are many spelling and grammatical errors in what you have written. You have not said what the question is.
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subject, verb agreement:
His poems also represents
Ovid's poems is
...when he find out...
several others.
Capitalization: Proper nouns must be capatilized.
Puncituation and structure: The first sentence the semicolon. This sentence structure is a bit complex for the first sentence, an introduction. Why make your reader stumble on the first sentence. Make it smooth.
Such as
Ovid in his artistic expression used transformations of different objects to express change. We see water, air, heaven represented as metamorphosis. In one instance, a daughter of a river god became a tree......
When writing, the first of any piece has to be a taster, for what is next. The purpose of the opening is to give a morsel of delight, and offer a hook to keep the reader involved.
subject, verb agreement:
His poems also represents
Ovid's poems is
...when he find out...
several others.
Capitalization: Proper nouns must be capatilized.
Puncituation and structure: The first sentence the semicolon. This sentence structure is a bit complex for the first sentence, an introduction. Why make your reader stumble on the first sentence. Make it smooth.
Such as
Ovid in his artistic expression used transformations of different objects to express change. We see water, air, heaven represented as metamorphosis. In one instance, a daughter of a river god became a tree......
When writing, the first of any piece has to be a taster, for what is next. The purpose of the opening is to give a morsel of delight, and offer a hook to keep the reader involved.
thansk ,I am stil working on it ,I will resubmit.
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Look up topics alphabetically.
Ovid in his artistic expression used transformations of different objects to express change. We see water, air, heaven and earth represented as metamorphosis. In one instance, a daughter of a river god became a tree. This transformation proves his working theme of metamorphoses. This story seems to be a fiction and does nor exist in the reality but it is still popular in the people.
Ovid‘s love poems teaches us about true and eternal love .For example, pymarus; in which a boy suicides when he finds out her girl friend is dead. This poem reminds me Romeo Juliet‘s love story that how they die for each other. The bodies of Pyramus and Thisbe were buried in one sepulcher, and the tree ever after brought forth purple berries, as it does to this day.
Ovid's poems are colorful collection of Folklore, Legends, and Mythology from the Greek cultures. His poems also represents how gods and godess intract with humans and how they make their decisions about humans. He has wide vacabulary,humorous tone,a sense of metaphor and knowelege of the world,which he doesn’t hesitate to show off. His love poems and Metamorphoses work have firmly established him as one of the greatest poet of the Western culture.
Ovid‘s love poems teaches us about true and eternal love .For example, pymarus; in which a boy suicides when he finds out her girl friend is dead. This poem reminds me Romeo Juliet‘s love story that how they die for each other. The bodies of Pyramus and Thisbe were buried in one sepulcher, and the tree ever after brought forth purple berries, as it does to this day.
Ovid's poems are colorful collection of Folklore, Legends, and Mythology from the Greek cultures. His poems also represents how gods and godess intract with humans and how they make their decisions about humans. He has wide vacabulary,humorous tone,a sense of metaphor and knowelege of the world,which he doesn’t hesitate to show off. His love poems and Metamorphoses work have firmly established him as one of the greatest poet of the Western culture.
Read carefully and compare your latest with the paragraphs below to find the corrected errors. One of the main things for you to work on is subject-verb agreement.
Ovid in his artistic expression used transformations of different objects to express change. We see water, air, heaven, and earth included in these metamorphoses. In one instance, the daughter of a river god became a tree. This transformation proves his working theme of metamorphoses. These stories are fiction, but still popular among readers.
Ovid's love poems teach us about true and eternal love. For example, in his section about Pyramus, a boy commits suicide when he finds out his girlfriend is dead. This poem reminds me Romeo and Juliet's love story and how they died for each other. The bodies of Pyramus and Thisbe were buried in one sepulcher, and afterward, the tree brought forth purple berries, as it does to this day.
Ovid's poems are a colorful collection of folklore, legends, and mythology from the ancient Greek cultures. His poems also represent how gods and goddesses interact with humans, and how they make decisions about humans. He has wide vocabulary, a humorous tone, a sense of metaphor, and a knowledge of the world which he doesn’t hesitate to show off. His love poems and his Metamorphoses have firmly established him as one of the greatest poets of Western culture.
The underlined sentence is redundant and unnecessary -- or else you need to use that sentence to explain specifically what that particular metamorphosis is meant to portray. So either delete it -- or rephrase so it doesn't simply repeat what you have already written.
Ovid in his artistic expression used transformations of different objects to express change. We see water, air, heaven, and earth included in these metamorphoses. In one instance, the daughter of a river god became a tree. This transformation proves his working theme of metamorphoses. These stories are fiction, but still popular among readers.
Ovid's love poems teach us about true and eternal love. For example, in his section about Pyramus, a boy commits suicide when he finds out his girlfriend is dead. This poem reminds me Romeo and Juliet's love story and how they died for each other. The bodies of Pyramus and Thisbe were buried in one sepulcher, and afterward, the tree brought forth purple berries, as it does to this day.
Ovid's poems are a colorful collection of folklore, legends, and mythology from the ancient Greek cultures. His poems also represent how gods and goddesses interact with humans, and how they make decisions about humans. He has wide vocabulary, a humorous tone, a sense of metaphor, and a knowledge of the world which he doesn’t hesitate to show off. His love poems and his Metamorphoses have firmly established him as one of the greatest poets of Western culture.
The underlined sentence is redundant and unnecessary -- or else you need to use that sentence to explain specifically what that particular metamorphosis is meant to portray. So either delete it -- or rephrase so it doesn't simply repeat what you have already written.
I am writng on notepad ,I don't have micrsoft world ,so may be that's why i am not catching my mistakes .
any way thanks a lot .you have no idea ,what ur help is mean to me :)
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any way thanks a lot .you have no idea ,what ur help is mean to me :)
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Ovid's poetry is a source of classical mythology. His poetry itself is very creative and beautiful. His most famous and familiar are myths, including the stories of Dophne, pyramus and Apollo. The main theme of the Metamorphoses is “change”. Ovid’s metamorphosis expresses the idea of change through successful and joyous transformations. He thinks that change must be brought by gods. He seems to be very pure to his thought because he really knows the things which he is talking about. To read the Ovid is to read the spiritual leader who talks about the philosophy of metamorphoses
that every thing in the world changes, even if it is a bird, a plant or a kid, they all change from one state to another. He managed the transition between the various topic and stories with great skill.
that every thing in the world changes, even if it is a bird, a plant or a kid, they all change from one state to another. He managed the transition between the various topic and stories with great skill.
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