Outline the achievements of Henry VIII of england:

Henry VIII was Henry VII's second son. At a young age he seemed the ideal Renaissance monarch.He was very good looking and had a good personality. In pratical matters he made himself an expert in government affairs and,shipbuilding , war and engineering. He was the most knowledgable ruler in English History. He changed the entire religion of Catholism to Protestant just to get a divorce from his wife and made himself becoame the head pope of the Church.

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He did not change "entire religion of Catholism to Protestant." He had little or no effect on Catholicism in the rest of Europe.
Henry VIII was Henry VII's second son. At a young age he seemed the ideal Renaissance monarch.He was very good looking and had a good personality. In pratical matters he made himself an expert in government affairs and,shipbuilding , war and engineering. He was the most knowledgable ruler in English History. T get a divoce from his wife, he ordered everyone to change their religion Catholism to Protestant, and persecuted the ones who didn't obey him He had little or no effect on Catholism in the rest of Europe.

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If you add "in England" after "ordered everyone," this is a good answer. :-)
Catholithism (spelling)

Henry VIII was Henry VII's second son. At a young age he seemed the ideal Renaissance monarch.He was very good looking and had a good personality. In PRACTICAL matters he made himself an expert in government affairs and,shipbuilding , war and engineering. He was the most KNOWLEDGEABLE ruler in English History. T get a DIVORCE from his wife, he ordered everyone IN ENGLAND to change their religion FROM CATHOLITHISM to Protestant, and persecuted the ones who didn't obey him He had little or no effect on CATHOLITHISM in the rest of Europe.
You did not say anything about murdering various wives, even Anne Boleyn for whom changed the religion of England so he could get rid of Catherine of Aragon and marry her.
thanks Ms Sue and thank you Damon:-D
if I mention what you just mentioned in my paragraph thing, then will you think it is good?
Sure. You could write a whole book on the subject (there are many) but what you have done looks fine.
thanks. I appreciate ur help Damon:)