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http://leo.stcloudstate.edu/acadwrite/thesistatement.html
This is one of the very best places I've seen online to help students write good thesis statements. It shows you sentences that aren't thesis statements and how to turn each one into a real thesis statement.
Just remember: Your thesis statement must include factual information plus your position/opinion/stance. Without your position on the topic, it isn't a true thesis statement. So think of this sentence as the angle you want to take on the topic and what you intend to prove by the end of your paper. (If your statement is simply factual, then there's nothing to prove!)
Okay, for English 12 im doing a semiar on Yann Martel's book, "Life of Pi"
The topic of my essay is
"martel depiction of Canada and India= the role of setting"
My main body paragraphs are
Setting in Canada
Setting in India
Setting in the Ocean
what im asking is that any points that i should add into these paragraphs( insight, interpretations, quotes, or person comment)
Thankyou
3 answers
alright thank you, ill post a question later on when i develop a thesis
OK, good!