Question

Numerous studies have demonstrated that playing video games can boost brain development it has been proven that they help with problem solving skills, decision making, and multitasking.
Video games are also beneficial in everyday life such as hand-eye coordination, reaction time, and focusing on an academic setting. As I was researching, I came across allot of contradicting research, such as people saying its beneficial for vison while others state its bad for vison or saying it makes you physically active while the other is saying it makes you gain weight. According to a review of research on the positive effects of video games, /) it states many ways of the benefits such as Improved Cognitive Abilities, Enhanced Motor Skills, Therapy and Rehabilitation, Entertainment, and increased Socialization. I believe video gaming can have a good side to it, but I also feel it has more negative effects than positive.

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