Now, imagine you find out who the culprit is (maybe a sibling, a pet, or a friend?). Write a new version of your description (THREE sentences), using active voice this time to emphasize who moved or took your backpack. Make sure you pay attention to conventions (spelling, capitalization, and punctuation).

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My mischievous little brother snatched my backpack while I was busy playing video games. He dashed out of the room, giggling as he clutched it tightly. I caught him hiding behind the couch, clearly enjoying his playful heist.