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Question

Hinduism, Confucianism and Buddhism are three of the world’s great belief systems. Compare and contrast their impact on the societies that embraced them.

I started it Although Hinduism, Confucianism and Buddhism......each impacted their societies by means of politics, economics and religion.

I need help making a good thesis for this essay. Thanks

Answer 1

That's not a complete sentence.

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http://leo.stcloudstate.edu/acadwrite/thesistatement.html

http://grammar.ccc.commnet.edu/grammar/composition/thesis.htm

http://writingcenter.unc.edu/resources/handouts-demos/writing-the-paper/thesis-statements

http://www.indiana.edu/~wts/pamphlets/thesis_statement.shtml