http://leo.stcloudstate.edu/acadwrite/thesistatement.html
This is one of the very best places I've seen online to help students write good thesis statements. It shows you sentences that aren't thesis statements and how to turn each one into real thesis statements.
Check out examples 1 and 6 especially.
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Read each of the following topic sentences, create your own topic sentence that expresses something about your particular opinion on the subject.
5.Plants require water, sunlight, and carbon dioxide to live.
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