MY NAME IS JERIC ONE TIME I WENT ON A TRIP TO MISSISSIPPI TO VISIT MT FAMILY. WE FIRST WENT TO GET A MOTEL

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AND DECIDED TO SEE THEM IN THE MORNING BECAUSE THE DRIVE TOOK 10 HOURS. FIRST THING IN THE MORNING WE GOT UP AND ATE AT A BREAKFAST PLACE WHICH WAS ALRIGHT. SO AFTER WE FINISHED WE HEADED TO MY GRANDMA 'S HOUSE WE SAW OUR UNCLES AND AUNTS WHO WERE HAVING FUN. I AND MY MIDDLE SISTER DID NOT HAVE FUN AS MUCH AS MY OLDER SISTER BECAUSE EVERYONE WOULD TALK TO HER ONLY BECAUSE SHE WAS THE OLDEST. ME AND MY SISTER WAS SITTING ON THE BIG ROCKS FOR THE TIME WE WENT TO MY GREAT GRANDMA FRUNEL'S. AFTER THE FRUNEL WE ATE CAKE IT WAS A LOT OF OPTIONS I PICKED CHOCLE AND TOOK THE REST HOME.

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MY NAME IS JERIC. ONE TIME, I WENT ON A TRIP TO MISSISSIPPI TO VISIT MY FAMILY. WE FIRST CHECKED INTO A MOTEL AND DECIDED TO SEE THEM IN THE MORNING BECAUSE THE DRIVE TOOK 10 HOURS. THE NEXT MORNING, WE GOT UP AND ATE AT A BREAKFAST PLACE THAT WAS ALRIGHT. AFTER WE FINISHED, WE HEADED TO MY GRANDMA'S HOUSE, WHERE WE SAW OUR UNCLES AND AUNTS HAVING A GREAT TIME.

UNFORTUNATELY, MY MIDDLE SISTER AND I DIDN'T HAVE AS MUCH FUN AS MY OLDER SISTER BECAUSE EVERYONE WOULD ONLY TALK TO HER SINCE SHE WAS THE OLDEST. MY SISTER AND I ENDED UP SITTING ON SOME BIG ROCKS FOR A WHILE UNTIL WE HEADED TO MY GREAT GRANDMA FRUNEL'S HOUSE. AFTER VISITING FRUNEL, WE ENJOYED SOME DELICIOUS CAKE WITH A LOT OF OPTIONS. I CHOSE CHOCOLATE AND EVEN TOOK SOME HOME WITH ME.

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MY NAME IS JERIC, AND ONE TIME, I TOOK A TRIP TO MISSISSIPPI TO VISIT MY FAMILY. AFTER A LONG 10-HOUR DRIVE, WE CHECKED INTO A MOTEL AND WOKE UP READY TO SEE EVERYONE IN THE MORNING. AT MY GRANDMA'S HOUSE, MY OLDER SISTER GOT ALL THE ATTENTION, WHILE MY MIDDLE SISTER AND I JUST SAT ON SOME BIG ROCKS FEELING LEFT OUT. LATER, WE VISITED MY GREAT GRANDMA FRUNEL AND ENJOYED A DELICIOUS CAKE, WHERE I CHOSE CHOCOLATE. I EVEN TOOK SOME CAKE HOME WITH ME TO ENJOY LATER!