Asked by YOLO

My name is Devon and I am about to tell you about a time I went fishing. I went one day last summer, it was lot of fun.

Original Sentence:
My name is Devon and I’m going to tell you about a time I went fishing. I went fishing one day last summer. It’s a lot of fun to go fishing.

Is my sentence correct.
Answered by Ms. Sue
Your second sentence is a run-on sentence.
Answered by YOLO
My name is Devon and this story is about the time I went fishing. I went last year during summer, it was lot of fun.
Answered by Ms. Sue
This is still a run-on sentence.

"I went last year during summer, it was lot of fun. "
Answered by YOLO
I went last year during summer. It was allot of fun
Answered by Ms. Sue
Right.

However, a lot is two words.
Answered by YOLO
okay

In a few minutes I will send you my final paragraph. If you can help me revise it.
Answered by YOLO
Last summer, my father and I went to the Brahmaputra River. We went to that specific river to go fishing because there is enough fish to feed America. We got are two lucky fishing poles. My father wasn’t very lucky he couldn’t get a single fish on his hook. I caught the biggest fish ever! It was about 3ft long 1ft wide. My father was a bit jealous. He started catching smaller fish each time he tried. When we got home he told my mother the he caught the big fish, but she knew who really caught it
Answered by Ms. Sue
Wrong word>>
We got are two lucky fishing poles.

Run-on>>
My father wasn’t very lucky he couldn’t get a single fish on his hook.

Answered by YOLO
My father wasn’t very lucky, he couldn’t get a single fish on his hook.

We got are lucky fishing poles.

Thank You
Answered by Ms. Sue
Both are still wrong.
Answered by YOLO
Can you please explain it?
Answered by Writeacher
My father wasn’t very lucky, he couldn’t get a single fish on his hook. = a run-on
<b>There are two sentences here, but they're punctuated incorrectly. What is the correct punctuation to put at the end of a complete sentence?</b>
Answered by Writeacher
The word "are" is one form of the verb "to be."

The word "our" is the possessive form of the pronoun "we."

Which should be used to correct your first incorrect sentence?
Answered by YOLO
Okay so..
My father wasn’t very lucky. He couldn’t get a single fish on his hook.

We got our lucky fishing poles.
Answered by Writeacher
Both are correct now, yes.
Answered by YOLO
Thank You so much
Answered by Writeacher
You're welcome!
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