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is this punctuation right? compound sentences use semicolons but i am not sure if this is one?
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Yes. You're right.
Please go through the below mail, in our today consignment Hamour fillet and cream dory fillet not yet become frozen, but items has been changed color and rotten, when delivery to out lest they are rejected cream dory and humor fillet because of the damage. So we would like to inform you we will deduct the fully shipment.
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Here is a revised version with corrections:
"Please review the following information regarding our recent consignment: The Hamour fillet and Cream Dory fillet did not freeze properly, resulting in both items changing color and becoming rotten. Upon delivery to our outlet, the Cream Dory and Hamour fillets were rejected due to the damage. Therefore, we regret to inform you that we will be deducting the full shipment amount."
"Please review the following information regarding our recent consignment: The Hamour fillet and Cream Dory fillet did not freeze properly, resulting in both items changing color and becoming rotten. Upon delivery to our outlet, the Cream Dory and Hamour fillets were rejected due to the damage. Therefore, we regret to inform you that we will be deducting the full shipment amount."
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