I assume you mean equality??
What is your thesis statement?
This site may help you.
http://leo.stcloudstate.edu/acadwrite/thesistatement.html
My history question is:
How did issues regarding African American quality shaped the US from 1850s to the 1920s?
I have my outline done but its just that I don't know how to connect it all together.
3 answers
Issues regarding African Americans shaped the United States from 1850 to the 1920s. African Americans had a great impact upon war, settlement patterns, legislation, politics, education and culture.
That's two sentences. Can you condense it to one, following the guidelines in the site I posted?