My grandmother, whom we affectionately call Nani, is the best baker I know if LeBron James is the king of the basketball court that she is the queen of the kitchen. Her soft, warm, chocolate chip cookies are better than miss fields are Rachel Ray her Keylime pie is the perfect delicate balance between sweet and savory her recipe box is her treasure, chest full of secret, recipes, handwritten on colorful, notecards, nanny, mixes and stairs, and measures with as much care as a scientist in a lab. Everything takes better if it’s made by nanny for everything she bakes is made with love.

Analyze the writers choice in 3 to 5 sentences describe the effect of work choice on the tone of the paragraph, including any analogies or allusions that were used

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The writer's choice of analogies and allusions in this paragraph adds depth to the description of the grandmother's baking skills and creates a tone of admiration and praise. By comparing the grandmother's baking prowess to LeBron James's dominance on the basketball court, the writer elevates her talent and expertise. Similarly, likening her recipe box to a treasure chest adds a sense of secrecy and mystery, implying that her recipes are highly prized and cherished. The writer's use of colorful notecards and the comparison of Nani's careful measuring to that of a scientist in a lab further emphasizes the meticulousness and precision that goes into her baking. Overall, the choice of these analogies and allusions contributes to a tone of reverence and admiration for Nani's baking abilities.