Ms. Sue can you please have a look at my previous post, I have added to it, thanks.

Answer 1

See below.

Answer 2

Ms. Sue I think I have done it, can you please check.

Answer 3

Looks good. :-)

Answer 4

thanks, were the contributions I jotted down for them correct as well?

Answer 5

Yes.

You're welcome.

Answer 6

okay, thanks again:-). After I'm done my paragraph, I'll post it up here for you to check.