Mosquitoes are the largest disseminated insects. They are found anywhere; they can be found on verandas, balconies steps, and many other places. They are at their best when behind bed curtains; this is where they delight at their successful conflicts. Naturalists enjoy observing mosquitoes it is a delight for them to see its four pairs of eyes with double refracting lenses, which the light glitters from. Their gossamer wings and their articulation of sixteen legs is a joy to see.
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