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Having won more than $200,000 during her career, her performances include victories in over 20 tournaments.
I think it would be better...
During her career, her performances include victories in over 20 tournaments winning more than 200,000.
? Is this correct
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200,000 what?
If I put a dollar sign in front of $200,000 would it be correct.
Almost.
You also need a comma after "tournaments."
You also need a comma after "tournaments."
Well, wait a minute...
Did the tournaments win $200,000?
no, the tournaments did not win
What about this?
Having won more than $200,000 during her career, she has been victorious in more than 20 tournaments.
Having won more than $200,000 during her career, she has been victorious in more than 20 tournaments.
Super!
oh good
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