The first sentence is more effective. It presents a broader context about the scale of book purchases, while the second sentence focuses on a specific issue regarding authors' profits. The first sentence successfully sets the stage for the topic, and the emphasis on "millions" captures attention.
Millions of books are purchased every year. However, authors only collect a small fraction of the profit.
How does the effectiveness of the two sentences compare?
They are equally effective.
The second is more effective.
Neither sentence is effective.
The first is more effective.
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