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Dear investors,
I just wanted to let you know how well my tech company has been running. It has been running successfully for six months. I just wanted to send an update to you. Thank you so much for investing in my tech company. We have been getting so many calls for computers that needed to be fixed or computers that have viruses on them that needed to be fixed as well. We have had a lot of people wanting to work for us we don’t need our now hiring sign anymore. But again thank you so much for investing in my tech company.
Sincerely,
Autumn Weber

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Subject: Company Update

Dear Esteemed Investors,

I hope this message finds you well. I am pleased to provide you with an update on the progress of our tech company, which has been operating successfully for the past six months.

During this period, we have experienced a significant increase in demand for our services, particularly in computer repairs and virus removal. This uptick in business has not only strengthened our position in the market but has also led to an influx of inquiries from prospective employees, allowing us to pause our current hiring efforts.

I would like to take this opportunity to express my heartfelt gratitude for your support and investment in our company. Your confidence in our vision has been instrumental in driving our success.

Thank you once again for your partnership.

Sincerely,
Autumn Weber