make a flash fiction rough draft and make it sound like a 11 year old

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Title: The Great Lemonade Stand Showdown

It was a super sunny Saturday, like one of those days that made the grass sparkle and the ice cream melt before you could even lick it. Me and my best friend, Max, decided we were going to make the biggest, bestest lemonade stand ever and become rich! Well, at least rich enough to buy a whole tub of ice cream each.

We set up our stand right at the end of the street, where the kids from the neighborhood would pass by on their bikes and scooters. Max painted a big sign that said “LEMONADE: 50 cents!” but it somehow looked more like “LIMONADE.” I tried not to laugh because, you know, he’s my best friend and everything.

Just as we were stacking up cups and filling a giant pitcher with our secret recipe (which was basically a lot of lemon juice, sugar, and way too much water), we noticed a rival lemonade stand opening up across the street. It was run by Jamie and her little brother, Sam. Their stand was decked out with glittery decorations and a sign that said “SUPER LEMONADE: 25 cents!” That was a total bummer.

Max and I whispered quickly. “We can’t let them win!” I said. So, we turned our stand into a lemonade battle zone. We decided to add ice cubes from my mom’s freezer, because everyone loves cold lemonade! Plus, I did a cool dance and started shouting, “Get your refreshing lemonade right here! Made with love and a sprinkle of magic!”

People started gathering. Even my dog, Rufus, joined in by wagging his tail and barking like he was giving a pep talk. But then, Jamie started offering free cookies with each cup. Not cool!

I knew we had to step up our game. So, I ran inside and grabbed my secret stash of sprinkles. “What if we make lemonade as sweet as rainbows?” I suggested to Max. He widened his eyes and grinned. In just a few minutes, we were pouring out cups of sparkling yellow lemonade, topped with rainbow sprinkles.

“LEMONADE WITH RAINBOW MAGIC!” I shouted.

The crowd cheered, and the kids started lining up. Jamie looked super jealous, and I could see her thinking hard. But guess what? Our lemonade sold out in minutes! We made a whole ten bucks, and Jamie made only five.

At the end of the day, we sat on my porch, counting our cash and eating ice cream. “Next time,” Max said, “we should add a bounce house too!” I laughed. That sounded awesome.

And just like that, we became the Lemonade Kings of Maple Street, ready to take on any challenge that came our way — even if it was just a little kid with a cookie.

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