Make A Difference Essay;

Question

Hook: "We cannot do everything, but we can do something." states Dillon Burroughs

Transition: (Do I need one or is this okay?)

Thesis: I believe everyone can make a difference.

Answer 1

Since the hook is the first sentence and the thesis is usually the last sentence of an introduction, what else do plan to write in your first paragraph?

Answer 2

I'm gonna add more to the hook and thesis.

Answer 3

ok

Here's an example of how three individuals made a difference.

http://www.mlive.com/news/kalamazoo/index.ssf/2014/03/gull_lake_schools_millage_requ.html