Look for capitalization, apostrophe placement, and making the sentence clear.

1. I asked dad to drive me to Amani's house.

2. Me and my friend Alicia went for lunch yesterday.

3. When running from a Zombie, make sure you're shoelaces are tied so that you don't trip and fall.

4. I got home late and Mom yells at me for not calling her to let her know where i will be.

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Marshawn David’s fingers were nearly frostbitten after playing in the snow for three hours