Look at the picture on the left. This is a plant. There are two leaves on the plant. There are also new buds which seem to have been<~~delete "been" opened just now.
Look at the picture on the top right. There are many beautiful flowers in the picture. Spring is the season of flowers. People enjoy looking at beautiful flowers in spring. Look at the picture below on the right. This is a new plant with new buds. We can see a frog on the buds. This reminds me of a new baby.
You have started a new year. You are on the starting line. You have to run toward the finish line. What do you have to do? You have to study hard and achieve your goal with courage and curiosity.
There are a few corrections at the beginning (leaves and buds are not the same things). The rest looks fine.
Look at the picture on the left. This is a plant. there are two leaves on the plant. They are new buds. The buds seemed to have been opened just now.
Look at the picture on the top right. There are many beautiful flowers in the picture. Spring is the season of flowers. People enjoy looking at beautiful flowers in spring. Look at the picture below on the right. This is a new plant with new buds. We can see a frog on the buds. This reminds me of a new baby. You have started a new year. You are on the starting line. You have to run toward the finish line. What do you have to do? You have to study hard and achieve your goal with courage and curiosity.
(Would you check the passage above? Thank you.)
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