Laya waited to put the muffins in the oven. She knew as soon as they went in, the smell would let the cat out of the bag. She never managed to surprise her sister with breakfast on her birthday. Mai always woke up first-or, even if she didn't, caught Laya mid-cook.

Question

Laya waited to put the muffins in the oven. She knew as soon as they went in, the smell would let the cat out of the bag. She never managed to surprise her sister with breakfast on her birthday. Mai always woke up first-or, even if she didn't, caught Laya mid-cook.
Which revision would help the paragraph use more sensory language?
(1 point)
• adding "of warm pumpkin and spices" after "smell"
• adding "red-handed" after "caught Laya"
• adding "impatiently" after "waited"
• adding "hot" before "oven".

GPT-4o mini · Answer

To enhance the sensory language in the paragraph, the best revision would be:

• adding "of warm pumpkin and spices" after "smell"

This addition evokes taste and scent, which can help create a more vivid and immersive experience for the reader.