Language and Style Unit Test

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Question
Use the paragraph to answer the question.

Kade and Lula took slow, careful steps. All around them, the moonlight kissed the red ivy. The ivy stretched out, strangling the garden bench, the fountain, and the gate—taunting them with its omnipresence. How could they possibly get around without touching it? A few droplets of chilly rain splattered down. Each icy drop seemed to say, “Hurry, hurry. You don’t have long.”

In 3–5 sentences, explain how the author used figurative language to create a specific effect. Make sure to explain what kind of figurative language the author used and the effect it had. Provide samples from the text to support your answer.

(4 points)

Short Answer Rubric (4 points)
Points Awarded Criteria
4
The answer is very clear.

The answer is fully supported by details.

There may be a few errors in grammar, usage, or mechanics. Errors do not interfere with meaning.

3
The answer is mostly clear.

The answer is supported by mostly relevant details.

There are a few errors in grammar, usage, or mechanics. Errors do not interfere with meaning.

2
The answer is somewhat clear.

Details are weak or not related.

There are some errors in grammar, usage, and mechanics. Errors interfere with meaning.

1
The answer is not clear.

There are few or no supporting details.

There are many errors in grammar, usage, and mechanics. Errors interfere with meaning.

0 The question is not answered.
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The author utilizes personification in the phrase "the moonlight kissed the red ivy," giving the moonlight human-like qualities that create a vivid image of the scene. This choice of language evokes a sense of intimacy and beauty, as if the moonlight is gently caressing the plants, enhancing the serene yet eerie atmosphere of the garden. Additionally, the droplets of rain are described as if they are urging Kade and Lula, with the words “Hurry, hurry. You don’t have long,” which conveys a sense of urgency and tension in the narrative. This use of figurative language effectively immerses the reader in the setting, heightening both the visual imagery and emotional stakes of the characters' predicament.