L. Han

The storm arose out of the north so fast, neither Justin nor his father saw it coming, but they heard it. The peal of distant thunder made Justin nearly drop his fishing pole into the lake, but his father said not to worry.

“It’s probably just a flash thunderstorm in the valley to the north of us,” Mr. Tate added.

Just then, Justin hooked a trout, and he was so overjoyed that he did not notice the purple clouds closing in. “Look, Dad, it’s a big one!” he yelled as he reeled it.

A lightning flash lit up the sky then, followed two seconds later by a deafening thunderclap. The look of alarm that crossed his father’s face frightened Justin.

“Put your gear down, son. We’re getting out of here,” Mr. Tate said while he secured the oars and began to row.

Justin stowed his fishing pole and put his prize fish in the cooler. The increasing wind was now blowing the boat backward every time his father rowed. Rain began to pelt them, and another lightning flash tore across the sky.

C-r-r-a-ck! The bolt hit a giant fir tree, splitting it down the center. Half the tree began to topple into the lake, directly toward their boat!

“Look out, Dad!” the boy shouted, while Mr. Tate rowed for their lives. With one final effort, he pulled the boat just beyond the reach of the mammoth tree. Its splash nearly turned the boat over.

“That was close!” Mr. Tate said. He rowed hard for home. By the time they reached the dock, the storm had passed.

On the car ride home, Justin thought about the fresh trout they would have for supper that night, and the fishing trip he would never forget.
Question

Paragraph 1 contributes to the plot by showing that —
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Paragraph 1 contributes to the plot by showing that the setting is initially peaceful and serene, with Justin and his father engaged in a leisurely activity—fishing. This contrasts sharply with the sudden arrival of the storm, which introduces tension and foreshadows the conflict that will unfold. The mention of thunder hints at impending danger, setting the stage for the dramatic events that follow. This establishes a sense of urgency and prepares the reader for the escalation of the situation as the storm rapidly approaches.