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Combine each sentences using a semicolon. First is the original and the (#A) is my answer.
1. Abalone fishing in California is strictly regulated. A person is allowed to harvest only twenty-four of these large mollusks per year.
1A Abalone fishing in California is strictly regulated; a person is allowed to harvest only twenty-four of these large mollusks per year.
2. City life offers many advantages. In many ways, however, life in a small town is much more pleasant.
2A. City life offers many advantages; however life in a small town is much more pleasant.
3. The door contains an inflatable slide to be used in an emergency. In addition each seat can become a flotation device.
3A. The door contains an inflatable slide to be used in an emergency; in addition each seat can become a flotation device.
4. Most car accidents occur within twenty-five miles of the home. Therefore, you should wear a seat belt on every trip.
4A. Most car accidents occur within twenty-five miles of the home; therefore, you should wear a seat belt on every trip.
5. Involvement in team sports provides more than just health benefits for young girl. It also increases their self-confidence.
5A. Involvement in team sports provides more than just health benefits for young girl; it also increases their self-confidence.
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