Question

Just want some advice on if i am doing this correctly. Thanks in advance.

Combine each sentences using a semicolon. First is the original and the (#A) is my answer.

1. Abalone fishing in California is strictly regulated. A person is allowed to harvest only twenty-four of these large mollusks per year.

1A Abalone fishing in California is strictly regulated; a person is allowed to harvest only twenty-four of these large mollusks per year.

2. City life offers many advantages. In many ways, however, life in a small town is much more pleasant.

2A. City life offers many advantages; however life in a small town is much more pleasant.

3. The door contains an inflatable slide to be used in an emergency. In addition each seat can become a flotation device.

3A. The door contains an inflatable slide to be used in an emergency; in addition each seat can become a flotation device.

4. Most car accidents occur within twenty-five miles of the home. Therefore, you should wear a seat belt on every trip.

4A. Most car accidents occur within twenty-five miles of the home; therefore, you should wear a seat belt on every trip.

5. Involvement in team sports provides more than just health benefits for young girl. It also increases their self-confidence.

5A. Involvement in team sports provides more than just health benefits for young girl; it also increases their self-confidence.

Answer 1

All are correct.

Answer 2

Thank you.