Jesse painted a picture she petted the cat which revision corrects the commas spice A Jessie painted a picture she petted the cat. B Jessie painted a picture then she she petted the cat. C Jesse painted, a picture, she petted the cat. D Jesse painted a picture, then she petted the cat.

Answer 1

The best revision that corrects the punctuation without adding unnecessary errors is:

D. Jesse painted a picture, then she petted the cat.

This option correctly uses a comma before "then" to separate the two independent clauses. Note that the name "Jesse" should also be spelled correctly throughout.