Choose the revision that best varies the sentence pattern without changing the meaning.
Jack and Manny are active kids. They swim for the swim team, or they play instruments in the school band. They also like to spend time outdoors when they hike and surf.
Jack and Manny are active kids who swim for the swim team and play instruments in the school band. Since they like to spend time outdoors, they also hike and surf.
Jack and Manny are active kids. After they swim for the swim team and play instruments in the school band, they spend time outdoors. They hike and surf.
Jack and Manny are active kids, and they swim for the swim team. They play instruments in the school band, and they spend time outdoors hiking and surfing.
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The best revision that varies the sentence pattern without changing the meaning is:
Jack and Manny are active kids who swim for the swim team and play instruments in the school band. Since they like to spend time outdoors, they also hike and surf.
This option combines the activities in a more complex structure while maintaining clarity and meaning.
