Question

its the first time ive ever made a poem and i dont know anything about making a poem so if anybody could help i'd appreciate it, this is what ive got so far

My mar lunar, losing my ambitions
She’s dry, so alone
My only sacrifice being of tears
My mar lunar, so big and damaged
As ancient as she is deep
She’s gorgeous and trying
Like a broken record
There she stays lying
My mar lunar

Answer 1

, so full of life
But so empty of hope
She’s aching and crying
But still she’s trying
My mar lunar, so strong and brave
She’s a warrior, a fighter
She’s a survivor, a believer
My mar lunar, so beautiful and wise
She’s a teacher, a guide
She’s a friend, a companion
My mar lunar, so full of love
She’s a blessing, a gift
She’s a dream, a hope