Read about the ellipsis here:
http://grammar.ccc.commnet.edu/grammar/marks/ellipsis.htm
Read about dashes here:
http://grammar.ccc.commnet.edu/grammar/marks/dash.htm
Read about commas here:
http://grammar.ccc.commnet.edu/grammar/commas.htm
Then make corrections.
It was a rainy day, but Joan and I had planned a trip. Joan wanted to go to the beach for a swim. I wasn't sure if we should go.
"I think we should wait a little longer... at least until the rain shows some signs of slowing down," I suggested.
"We can't swim without getting wet anyway," replied Joan, questioning my choice of swimsuit--the one my mom had bought at a secondhand store.
I put the punctuation in the choices are , ... or- its not a hyphen its a dash. they can be used more then once.
do you think this is right?
3 answers
Did you figure it all out? The ellipsis (...) is used to indicate missing words in a quoted work, not a pause or a shift in content.
Here's what you should have done:
"I think we should wait a little longer, at least until the rain shows some signs of slowing down," I suggested.
"We can't swim without getting wet anyway," replied Joan, questioning my choice of swimsuit, the one my mom had bought at a secondhand store.
Here's what you should have done:
"I think we should wait a little longer, at least until the rain shows some signs of slowing down," I suggested.
"We can't swim without getting wet anyway," replied Joan, questioning my choice of swimsuit, the one my mom had bought at a secondhand store.
thank-you