“It was a dark and stormy night. It was a full moon on Halloween. Fog filled the streets. Sara sat alone in the empty house. Little did she know about the evil lurking outside her door.” What is the issue with this creative writing?

Question

A. It needs to be proofread
B. It is full of clichés
C. It lacks a variety of sentence structure
D. There are no issues

Answer 1

B. It is full of clichés

The phrases "It was a dark and stormy night" and "Little did she know" are both considered clichés in the realm of creative writing.