“It was a dark and stormy night. It was a full moon on Halloween. Fog filled the streets. Sara sat alone in the empty house. Little did she know about the evil lurking outside her door.” What makes this passage weak?

Question

A. It needs to be proofread
B. It is full of clichés
C. There are no issues
D. It lacks a variety of sentence structure

Answer 1

B. It is full of clichés

The use of clichés in the passage makes it weak and less original.