Is this sentence right. I mean wrote right
The people outside the Apple store, that have been waiting all night, are trying to purchase a new iPhone.
Victor wanted to impress Teresa,so he pretended to know French.
Do have the comma in the right place
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Yes, the commas are placed correctly.
In your first sentence, change ‘that’ to ‘who’ since you’re referring to people, not things. I’d also write ‘new iPhones’ — plural since a bunch of people wouldn’t buy only one phone!
Commas are right.
Commas are right.
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