Is this sentence okay?

Brom Bones told Ichabod and the rest of the men he was talking to at the Tassel's party in which they were invited of the time he supposedly encountered the Headless Horseman of Sleepy Hollow.

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No -- it's too convoluted and confusing.

You need to divide this into 2 or 3 sentences.
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