It's a compound-complex sentence, and it needs one comma added. Can you see where?
http://grammar.ccc.commnet.edu/grammar/sentences.htm#sentence_types
"...has a need to feel accepted and being cared about..."
This part needs to have parallel form. How will you fix it?
http://grammar.ccc.commnet.edu/grammar/parallelism.htm
Is this sentence grammatically correct?
''Everyone has a need to feel accepted and being cared about and it is family and friends that play a vital role in individual’s lifestyle choices.''
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would that be better: Everyone has a need to feel being accepted and cared about, and it is family and friends that play a vital role in individual’s lifestyle choices
It would be best to eliminate "being." Substitute "who" for "that."
Almost perfect!
Remove "being" in the first clause, and add "an" before "individual" in the second clause. Then everything will be fine.
Remove "being" in the first clause, and add "an" before "individual" in the second clause. Then everything will be fine.
so it would be this way: Everyone has a need to feel accepted and cared about, and it is family and friends that play a vital role in an individual’s lifestyle choices
Yes.