Is this sentence correct? I feel like "convincing of others" sounds wrong.

How can I say this sentence in a better way.

In the essay "Organ Sales Will Save Lives" Joanna Mackay was easily convincing of others to agree with her position, which I thought was very effective.

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In the essay, "Organ Sales Will Save Lives," Joanna Mackay easily convinces others to agree with her.
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