Asked by kate

Is this sentence a run on?

An important decision made by Parvana was when Parvana agreed to go outside to buy food while she was dressed as a boy.
Answered by Ms. Sue
No, it's not a run on sentence, but it is awkward.

Answered by kate
How should I fix it?
Answered by Ms. Sue
Use the active voice.

Parvana made an important decision when she went outside to buy food while she was dressed as a boy.

Answered by kate
Thank you Ms.Sue
Answered by Ms. Sue
You're welcome, Kate.
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