Newspapers are a great way to start your day. Many people think newspapers contain only dreary news, well their wrong. <~~run-on, pronoun error
Newspapers are surprisingly interesting, and you might actually like them. There even might be something about your hometown. There are articles about lots of different things, for example, unusual events, or people. A lot of the articles are truly fascinating, and you might actually enjoy them. There are articles that are kid friendly, and that they will like too.
There are lots of generalizations here, but if that's what you want ...
I'd also rephrase to get rid of all the "you" uses.
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Newspapers are a great way to start your day. Many people think newspapers contain only dreary news, well their wrong. Newspapers are surprisingly interesting, and you might actually like them. There even might be something about your hometown. There are articles about lots of different things, for example, unusual events, or people. A lot of the articles are truly fascinating, and you might actually enjoy them. There are articles that are kid friendly, and that they will like too.
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