Your email is generally polite and communicates the necessary points. However, there are a few adjustments you could make for clarity and professionalism. Here’s a revised version:
Subject: Re: Explanation Request
Good evening [Leader's Name],
Thank you for your email. I apologize for missing your previous calls; I was experiencing some phone issues that have since been resolved.
Regarding the medical documents, I would like to clarify that the sector hospital does not provide those specific documents, as I mentioned previously.
Thank you for your understanding.
Best regards,
Rebecca
Key Changes:
- Subject Line: Adding a subject line makes it easy for the recipient to identify the purpose of your email.
- Personal Touch: Including the leader's name can create a warmer tone.
- Clarity and Precision: Slight rephrasing for clarity.
- Professional Tone: The slight adjustments enhance professionalism while maintaining a courteous tone.