Is this a good thesis Students should not be required in public schools, the education system should focus more on education, rather than what the student is wearing.
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This is a terrible thesis. Proofread!
Thank you but have no idea to put it together please help would this be good Thesis: Students should not be required to wear uniforms in public schools; the education system should focus more on education rather than what the student is wearing.
Much better. :-)
I think you may have problems developing arguments to defend it, though.
I think you may have problems developing arguments to defend it, though.
Thank you so much