Is this a good thesis Students should not be required in public schools, the education system should focus more on education, rather than what the student is wearing.

Answer 1

This is a terrible thesis. Proofread!

Answer 2

Thank you but have no idea to put it together please help would this be good Thesis: Students should not be required to wear uniforms in public schools; the education system should focus more on education rather than what the student is wearing.

Answer 3

Much better. :-)

I think you may have problems developing arguments to defend it, though.

Answer 4

Thank you so much