Is this a good thesis statement for an expository essay on Alcoholism ?

Question

Throughout history , Alcoholism has caused one to be viewed by society as ethically or morally weak , but through Alcoholic Anonymous , help is available for Alcoholism .

Answer 1

(The word "alcoholism" does not have a capital A.)

It's an OK thesis statement, but not very catchy. Read the poor and redone thesis statements here and see how you can make yours better:
http://leo.stcloudstate.edu/acadwrite/thesistatement.html