Asked by 2phoneeeeee

is this a good haiku

Spilled emotions
Slipped and fell
I’m falling for you

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Answered by 2phoneeeeee
and the title is watch your step
Answered by Writeacher
Sounds fine.

It has -- what? -- 12 syllables, not counting the title. Do you have a direction about the number of syllables?

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Answered by 2phoneeeeee
spilled emotions
slipped and fell on the floor
im falling for you ??

that definition is confusing
Answered by Writeacher
"seventeen syllables, in three lines of five, seven, and five, traditionally evoking images of the natural world"

Your first line has 4 syllables.
Your second line has 6 syllables.
Your third line now has 5 syllables.
I see no references to nature.

Or did your teacher give you different directions?
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