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Is their anything else I need to do or add my this assignment because I suppose to have 175 word.

I have to pick one of the following but I help explaining the one that I pick so can someone give me an example of one please. Choose one of the following categories: shelter, clothing, food, transportation, or culture. Begin with a broad statement about the category. Next, narrow down the category. Then, keep narrowing down the category to reach an image that is concrete and detailed by the end of the description.

Shelter --

Shelter is anything that helps protect people from the elements.

Shelters can be natural such as caves.

Shelters can also be manmade, such as tents, huts, mobile homes, ranch houses, mansions, castles, and apartment buildings.

Apartment buildings can be high rise or low rise.

My apartment building is four-stories tall.

My apartment has two bedrooms, nearly 1,000 square feet, and is on the ground floor.

Shelter is anything which increases the survivability of a living organism when faced with environmental factors or actions which would otherwise reduce the chances of surviving.

The environmental factors which reduce survivability can be natural or man-made.

The living organism is usually animal and usually man.

The most common natural environmental factor is the weather, and the shelter is normally used to protect against cold.

Almost as equal is protection against other hostile animals.

In the case of humans, shelter can also protect against aggression by other humans as in events of war or crime.

4 answers

At the statement "Shelter is anything which increases...", you seem to go back to a broader statement. Judging by the topic, you should instead continue by providing even more detail about your apartment, such as the number of rooms, furniture, etc.
Holy smoke, Fats!! This is a creative writing class. You're not supposed to simply copy down what someone else has written.
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Come up with your own descriptions and details.
Fats -- you chose to take creative writing -- but you copied my example -- word for word.

You need to exercise your creativity -- and not copy others' ideas and words. Plagiarism is against the rules of most schools!

If you still don't understand the concept embodied in this assignment, perhaps you should drop this class.
may be that fats wanted to do well! fats you could take some ideas from ms. sue but then build your own story round ms. sue's ideas