Is their anything else I can add to my conclusion.

Question

Please check my artist statement. I know I show it to you but i did some changes again and i would like for you guys to check it.

writing statemrnt:
The reason why my essay "Vive la difference!" relates to this year PTA Reflection theme "Diversity Means.." is because my school is marvelous and a terrific program. In addition, my school does lot of things in their diversity and since I know how my school do a lot of things in their diversity, I knew writing an essay about it will look great relating it to the theme.

Mission Statement
”.... embraces teaching and learning to raise academic achievement for all students, and to develop citizens who respect diversity."

Art wk statement:
The reason why my photographic collage relates to this year PTA Reflection theme "Diversity Mean.." is because these pictures I found in the internet are Multicultural pictures and it really relates to the theme. Diversity also have something to do with Multicultural. Culture Diversity is the variety of human societies or cultures in a specific region, or in the world as a whole.

Answer 1

the mission statement is part of my writing statement

Answer 2

Please proofread your statement. There are several errors I think you can find.

Answer 3

The reason why my photographic collage relates to this year PTA Reflection theme "Diversity Mean.." is because these pictures I found in the internet are Multicultural, School/Community pictures. Diversity also have something to do with Multicultural. The main thing about Diversity is Multicultural and our School and Community.

The reason why my essay "Vive la difference!" relates to this year PTA Reflection theme "Diversity Means.." is because my school is a marvelous and a terrific program. As I was learning about my school, I realize there are a lot of things we do in our diversity and we always will continue to consistently celebrate our diversity. My school done a lot of activities in our diversity.

Mission Statement
”Chestnut Ridge Middle School embraces teaching and learning to raise academic achievement for all students, and to develop citizens who respect diversity."

is their anything else I should add to my conclusion for my essay

Answer 4

Good.

Answer 5

ok

is there anything else i could add to my conclusion for my essay i want to write 2 more sentences.

Answer 6

I can't think of anything else -- but go for it! :-)

Answer 7

Ok I leave it but thank you for helping me Ms. Sue and Sra.

Bye!!!
Good Night !!!

Answer 8

You're welcome, Laruen. Good night.