Think about the sentence in list form ~
The report considers
- important factors in choosing a medical facility,
- ratings of services at the urgent care center,
- reasons why HMO members do not use the center, and
- offers suggestions for increase in member usage.
After "considers" each element of the series starts with what kind of word -- noun, verb, adjective, or what?
Let me know and we'll go from there.
Incorrect sentence: The report considers important factors in choosing a medical facility, ratings of services at the urgent care center, reasons why HMO members do not use the center, and offers suggestions for increase in member usage.
I know this has parallelism problems. I have tried rewriting every way I can think of to correct it with no finished product.
Any help would be much appreciated.
2 answers
important is an adjective; ratings is a noun; reasons is a noun;offers is a verb.