In three to four sentences, write a narrative paragraph that includes two transitions. The transitions should tell information about two of the following: what is happening when, where the action is happening, or whether time has passed between events.(4 points) is it possible to make it sound more like a 6th grader?
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One sunny Saturday afternoon, my family and I decided to go for a hike at the local nature reserve. As we entered the trailhead, we could hear the cheerful chirping of birds welcoming us. After walking for about an hour, we reached a breathtaking waterfall where we sat and enjoyed a picnic lunch. It was the perfect way to spend the day together in nature.