Question

In this project I done about cells I learn about the job of each part of the cell. I also learn about where it’s found. As I was doing some research on this project I learn so many things. For example , vacuoles are water-filled storage spaces found in cells. They are found in both animal and plant cells (but they are more common in plant cells they are also bigger in plant cells). Vacuoles store food, collect waste products.


Is this paragraph is good????

Answer 1

I did this project (extra credit) about cells so I done a powerpoint and my teacher said that I have to write a 5 sentence paragraph on what did I learn about cells.

Answer 2

You have a problem with verb tenses. These are the corrections you should make.

In this project I <b>did</b> about cells<b>,</b> I <b>learned</b> about the job of each part of the cell. I also <b>learn</b> about where it’s found. As I was doing some research on this project<b>,</b> I <b>learned</b> so many things. For example, vacuoles are water-filled storage spaces found in cells. They are found in both animal and plant cells<b>, but</b> they are more common in plant cells<b>. They</b> are also bigger in plant cells. Vacuoles store food <b>and</b> collect waste products.

Answer 3

I was going to add the ed for learned but I thought it would be a grammar mistake. OOps I forgot to put and for the last sentence I got it from my notes.

Thank You Ms. Sue! )

Answer 4

You're welcome Laruen.

Oops -- I forgot the -ed on "I also <b>learned</b> about . . .

Answer 5

yup! :)